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To be better writing time六下Project1 Part B he always listens to his teachers. He likes eating fruit.But he usually goes to bed late, so he sometimes feels sleepy in the morning.He often runs on the road. Its not safe.3. Choose and say T Now, Please choose 1 person in your group and try to introduce them. Pictures can help you.4. Think and classify T They have many different habits. Look, he puts things in order, brushes his teeth, they are living habits. What other kinds of habits do they havestudy habits, safety habits, eating habits T Everyone has different habits, different manners. Thats who they really are.Step 3 Presentation1. Introduce yourself T Can you show me a real youYou can choose 1 or 2 aspects to introduce yourself, try to be different from others. （板书This is me）Dont forget to use frequency adverbs. 出示TipSo you never You mean you every day. 2. Read and learn “This is me” T Now I know something about you. Do you want to know about me出示教师的This is meThis is me I usually go to work early in the morning. Every day, I learn English on Apps after work. But sometimes I use too much mobile phone and go to bed after 12 oclock. I even use my mobile phone while driving. T This is who I am, a real me. Do you still like meWhat kinds of habits do I write Living habits, study habits, safety habits.T I also use some frequency adverbs. What are they Usually, sometimes. What other frequency adverbs do you know 板书3. Lets write T Can you write like me 要求1. 结合实际，用3-4句话描述自己的习惯；2. 正确使用频率副词使描述更准确；3. 拼写正确，书写规范。计时2304. Lets share T Who wants to introduce yourself to me（请一位同学）I think you can /You will What else do you want to say to him TWho else wants to shareCan you give him/ her some suggestions5. Discuss and say T Your suggestions are great I think we all want to be better in the future. To be a better student, a better daughter or son, a better friend We also can help each other to be better You can give suggestions in groups. One reads his writing; the others give advice one by one. 6. Read and learn “Suggestions” T You are really good at giving suggestions. I heard many brilliant and useful suggestions I think I really need some suggestions too. So, boys and girls, can you give me some suggestions T According to your suggestions, I want to make some changes. Look at my writing.To be better, I shouldnt play too much mobile phone. I should go to bed early. And I will never use my mobile phone while driving, because its too dangerous. I will try my best to be better in the future.TWhat do I want to make Tip建议要有针对性。THow do I write I shouldnt I will I will never What else can we say when we give suggestions I can/ cant I must/ mustnt7. Lets shareT Please share in groups according to the suggestions youve got. What do you want to change 请两个学生说一说8. Lets writeT You said very well. Lets write them down. Tips 1. 针对自己的不足，简要描述改进办法；2.句式多样，表达准确；3拼写准确，书写规范。Step 4 Check and uate1. Read and checkT When we uate our writing, we often use a checklist. It can help you to find some problems and make your writing better. So, let me make a model. Who wants to share your writingChecklist1. I can write about my habits and I know how to be better in my writing.我能写出自己的习惯并知道怎样改进。2. I can use usually, sometimes to make my writing more accurate.我能使用usually, sometimes等频率副词去使文章更准确。3. I can use should, can, will to express suggestions.我能使用should, can, will等表达建议。 4. I can spell correctly and write well.我能拼写正确，书写规范。2. Check in pairsT Do you know how to use the checklist Good, lets check in pairs. 200T How many stars did you get 简单反馈3. SummarizeT From this lesson, we know we can use frequency adverbs to make your writing more accurate. When we give suggestions, we can say should To be better is a lifelong challenge. We should be patient. Examine your self, try to break some bad habits, build more good habits, set goals for yourself and go for it. I believe youll be a better person. And I also learned a lot from you today, I think I will be a better teacher, too. Step 5 Homework1. 再次完善短文。2. 和家人、朋友分享你的短文，并根据短文中给自己的建议制定“21天习惯养成表”，努力变得更好。
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